The first assignment

I'll explain a few things about myself. I'm Jinie. This is the first writing assignment of the glps writing course and I'm looking foward to it.
 First, my personality. My friends say that I'm a girl who works pretty hard to get what I want. For example, tests. I almost always study really hard so there are dog-eared pages on lots of books. In the last school test Our teacher warned us to get a nice score or else. Naturally we all went home and scrounged all of our books, me especially. When the test scores came out I was pretty pleased with myself. 99 out of a 100! To summarize I like to work hard, than playing.
  My favorites, my hobbies!  I have a lot to say. My first hobby is to play the piano, because it makes all of my stres fly away. When I play the piano, I have to concentrate on the piano, not on my stress. I wish I could play the piano here. I miss my flying fingers. My favorite song to play is 'Pirates of the Caribbean "He's a Pirate" since it is wery loud, powerful, and famous. I especially enjoy famous songs.
   My second hobby is reading. I like almost any sort of book, classics, adventure, fiction, non-fiction, mystery, etc. My home is practically a library, with books here and there on the shelves, tables, anywhere! I like adventure best touched with a bit of fantasy with a hint of classical style and motivation. A book called "First Test is a bit like this. It has a lot of motivation and I encourage others to have a go with this book.
    Third, I love singing. Not K-pop songs like most Korean girls but almost any song. I go to professional vocal music lessons and I'm in our school's choir. I learn a bit of pop, some opera, bit of jazz, and almost anything else. Still, the only one thing I dislike is K-pop. That's strange since I'm a Korean and nearly every Korean and a lot of foreigners are cuckoo for K-pop. Still, I am a bit of an oddball.
    I'll finish off with a bit of family information. I'm an only child, but our family is a family of four. I have a small pet, my darling hamster. It's a  dusky honey colored male who's "slightly-overweight". Change that to just 'overweight'. I've only had him for about three months and he's almost twice the size as he was first. Not surprising since he eats a lot and love to sleep.
  Well, that's it! I hope I get to know you all better.